Princess of Anastasia- In love with 2 Princes! (ON HOLD)

Princess of Anastasia- In love with 2 Princes! (ON HOLD)

18.2K Reads 141 Votes 16 Part Story
Jasmin By jasmin28 Updated Feb 27, 2011

Miley was just a regular girl and then finds out she's really a princess, has cool powers and has to marry one of her cousins? Before she turns 20!!! And she loves two guys; which will she marry? Read to find out!

WolfshadowsSong WolfshadowsSong Jan 01, 2011
That's fine, I understand completely. ^_^ I was just pointing it out so that you were aware of it. 
jasmin28 jasmin28 Jan 01, 2011
@WolfshadowsSong thanks! i noe it's just that i posted theese chapters in a hurry and i didn't edit it
WolfshadowsSong WolfshadowsSong Jan 01, 2011
Very good. If I may suggest, however, that you go back and fix a few grammatical mistakes. For example:
                              
                              "Her face was almost an perfect heart...." 
                              
                              The "an" of course is suppose to be "a" (I'm sorry, I'm a bit of a grammar Nazi >.<)
                              
                              Keep writing. I'm sure your story will do well. 
x0xangel21 x0xangel21 Nov 03, 2010
ill post the link on ur wall....i mean profile  srry in facebook mode...
x0xangel21 x0xangel21 Nov 03, 2010
i found a girl but her eyes are a biright blue her hair matches the description
Vivien_B Vivien_B Sep 24, 2010
Love this! And the cover is really pretty! =) You have my vote!