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Fingerprints

Fingerprints

4.6K Reads 884 Votes 25 Part Story
Bethany By ShhBethsReading Updated Mar 20

Kristen Mason is a teenage girl who has had her life planned out since she could remember. Cory Stevens is the new boy in the year who quickly becomes interested in Kristen. One drunken night between the two of them leaves them in a decision that will change their lives forever. They're both leaving their mark on the earth, but a lot earlier than intentionally planned.

I never took any classes like this but I hated group work so this would've made me mad.
- - Mar 29
 #believerbc 
                              It's not really required to mention "even though" they look nothing alike. They're not really related, are they.?
 #believerbc
                              It's nice to see a MC who's not the scared, back if the class sack of potatoes that is so common. I like that she has spirit and sass. 
                              I think the male MC is a little dull though and give him more dialogue to show more of his personality.
                              With all said, Good job on the first chapter.
It's funny how that works. You spend weeks doing nothing then boom! Test time lol
You're shifting tenses hmmm: He replies or his reply is, Adan and Laura what they missed
penielic penielic Apr 05
I think you should divide this paragraph into 2 or 3 a d generally make your paragraphs shorter because of your readers who read from their mobile phones.