The badboys pickup lines

The badboys pickup lines

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bubbles_666 By bubbles_666 Completed

Rose Quinn has just moved into a new town with her family and is known as the new girl at school. But one thing she doesn't know is that her neighbour is the schools number one badboy and player. What happens when Rose finds a pickup line stuck to her window when she first moves into her new house. It all started with one pickup line, One pickup line to start them all...

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  • badboy
  • boyxgirl
  • drugs
  • highschool
  • lines
  • loss
  • love
  • newgirl
  • pickup
  • pickuplines
  • romance
  • smoking
  • teenfiction
  • thebadboyspickuplines
TriciaMuhiza0 TriciaMuhiza0 Dec 12, 2017
Yeah you use as alot in this chapter try something  new or different if you may
inkosij10 inkosij10 Dec 05, 2017
You use the word " as " way too many times. Use different conjunctions and your story will be better. It's good, just don't use " as " too many times
ahviejolie ahviejolie Sep 25, 2016
Everytime I see 'Mummy' I think of Max mistaking the kid thing on Wizards Of Waverly Place
KinkyDolan KinkyDolan Feb 16, 2017
If I had heard him say that, he would be on the ground SO fast. I understand it's a book. And you are doing an amazing job to make this character seem like a douche, but if this was real life, I would hurt him so bad his balls would shrivel up if he ever said that in front of me.
book_lover_05 book_lover_05 Aug 08, 2016
SLUMBER PARTY!!! THEY SHOULD DO EACH OTHERS HAIR, NAILS, MAKEUP AND HAVE A PILLOW FIGHT
starfights starfights Apr 02, 2016
like seriously * cue the eye role* is this what all boys really think about.
                              
                              well you guys are bad boys shouldn't have expected soo much from you guys