Vampitch

Vampitch

2.2K Reads 56 Votes 10 Part Story
Samantha Pattinson By PGEchic Updated Dec 10, 2011

At one point in everyone's life we're forced to find ourselves. But for fourteen year old Alajah, finding yourself becomes not only a challenge but a journey. A mission with no way out.
After spending majority of her life in an orphanage, her life takes a turn for the dangerous. First she's forced to face the fact that she's not normal. Her powers are no longer caged inside, but they've been released and they're uncontrollable and more importantly . . . deadly. Second, Robert, the orphanage's recluse, seems to know more about her newly acquired abilities then she does. Can she trust his knowledge or will he lead her to a terrifying demise? And finally when the owner of the orphanage is trying to kill her, she is forced to find her parents. The same parents that left her for dead eight years ago.

geek342 geek342 Jun 08, 2011
ok. that was a great beginning to a story. fanned, voted, put in my library and now reading on!
candybanapple candybanapple Apr 25, 2011
Why is she being a coward? She should have tried to helped the woman even if she was told to run... Anyways its great so far- moving on to the next chapter =D
BlondFangs BlondFangs Oct 20, 2010
This is awesome! I luv your description and choice of words, it flows brilliantly and the plot is really interesting! 
PGEchic PGEchic Aug 24, 2010
@xXxSilentRainxXx Um thanks. Glad you liked it. Just wish I knew what the tenses were. 
CarefulCassie CarefulCassie Aug 24, 2010
Okay-dokey. First, thank you for reading my story.Second yours is amazing. The only thing I can really see is the tenses. Well, not the tenses exactly but.. ugh Idk know how to explain it. You know what, never mind. Its just really good. lol
PGEchic PGEchic Aug 24, 2010
@Sophia5 Lolz. Nice to know. But you might be a little disappointed because it takes a little while to get to all that in my story.