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Mara L. Ortiz By Ortiz-Novels Completed

Gunner Ardent discovers that his Luna is none other than Mindy Rivers. Granddaughter to one of the most ruthless fighters the Cobalt Nation has ever seen. Mindy, however, is a whole different story. She is shy, thin, and very breakable. He's been taught all his life that appearances do not matter, that his Luna will flourish once she becomes of age. But it is the stale scent that she carries that kills all hope withing Gunner. He could care less that she is terribly shy or too skinny, but he cannot overlook this specific problem. Mindy Rivers cannot be crowned Luna for she will be unable to provide the Nation with security and promise that the bloodline will continue.

Oh author, how can you be soo good? You are spoiling us with your hypnotizing writing, compelling us to read on.
louiscide louiscide Feb 21
I tried to follow this but the spiel about evolution. I couldn't get into it.
reader3090 reader3090 Oct 06, 2016
Abe sucks he caused a civil war. It sound like a good story but evolution is not real
Clumsily_Falling Clumsily_Falling Nov 12, 2015
That was very beautiful. Most books give us the more religious explanation but I love the scientific one better. And the way you explained it was really amazing I could see it happening in my head. Writers like you are the reason I fell in love with books
tanzhiying98 tanzhiying98 Nov 09, 2015
This is the best (And most logical) prologue i have ever had the pleasure of reading.
denaminatrix denaminatrix Jul 05, 2015
WOW! what a way to introduced a story. incorporating a refresher outline on Darwin's Theory of evolution and Abe for Abraham Lincoln...
                              KUDOS to you @Ortiz-Novels...
                              This makes the story seems real, i.e., could validate the werewolves existence.