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Quest for Revenge (The Secret of the Sword Trilogy)

Quest for Revenge (The Secret of the Sword Trilogy)

6.6K Reads 154 Votes 5 Part Story
Kristin By MusicalAddict Completed

PART 1: Danger. Magic. Secrets. Faith. An ancient sword surrounded by legend, a stubborn princess bent on revenge, and a dragon, old as time, injecting fear into the hearts of all who hear the name Syrelius. Join Princess Melina as she embarks on a journey into unknown lands. Taking with her a sword with hidden powers and companions who each have something to hide, she discovers that there is more to life than vengeance.

  • dragon
  • horse
  • journey
  • magic
  • princess
  • quest
  • sword
MusicalAddict MusicalAddict Mar 30, 2013
@DarkAngelGal thanks for that! I'll have another look at the mill and see what I can do. I wanted this beginning to be fairly fast paced, which I think is why I didn't put in too much in the first place.
DarkAngelGal DarkAngelGal Mar 30, 2013
This was a pretty good and descriptive prologue. Although it could still use more go more in depth with what the old mill looked like. 
                              Other than that, this prologue was pretty good! 
MyztikalTearz MyztikalTearz May 08, 2012
I'm a fantasy fanatic and to be honest, most of what I've found on here are disappointing. This, however, is an exemplary prologue and I'm actually continuing to your first chapter!
MusicalAddict MusicalAddict Feb 05, 2012
@AislinnRiley Thanks, I hope you continue to enjoy it! I've looked at the opening of your "Anthology of Faeries" and it sounds really interesting. I'm definitely going to keep reading :)
AislinnRiley AislinnRiley Feb 02, 2012
Your opening is very captivating, and definitely not cliched!  I love the way you capture your reader's interest and you have a very clean and nice writing style!!!  <3
- - Nov 07, 2011
Very descriptive :) I love fantasy stories and I have a feeling that this story is going to have a very interesting plot. It was a very mysterious chapter. Love it. Nothing needs to be edited from my perspective :)