More Than Just Friends (Completed / Currently Editing)

More Than Just Friends (Completed / Currently Editing)

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Echo Reed By Iam_Echo Completed

"I don't want to be friends with you anymore, Ronnie!" he protested.

There was a brief silence between us. I let his words sink in and my heart started to feel like it had been crushed into dust. I was trembling now. My mouth broke out sobs as he slowly approached me. He clasped my face with both of his hands. I tried to move away but he held onto my face tightly but gently.

"Ronnie..." he murmured. I was still shaking and crying. Then he pressed his forehead against mine and closed his eyes. Our breath mingled with each other and my lips quivered at the feel of his breath against my mine.

"I don't want us to be friends anymore." he breathed. Before I could even respond his lips slammed into mine. He was gentle at first but then his lips started to consume me. That's when I realized what he was really trying to tell me.

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A lot of things has changed for the past eight years.

Veronica (Ronnie) Webber grew up and moved on with her life without her dear friend, Jake Morrison. After Jake had promised something to her when they were kids, she believed him and held on to that promise. But as she grew up she decided to just let it go and believe that it was never going to happen.

Unexpectedly though, his best friend comes back. They try to make up for the time lost, remember the things they used to do and discover new feelings in the process.

What if something from their past resurfaces and hidden secrets destroys their relationship?

Will Jake and Ronnie ever rekindle their friendship again?

  • bestfriends
  • damian
  • echoreed
  • friendship
  • jake
  • love
  • morethanjustfriends
  • relationships
  • romance
  • ronnie
  • teenfiction
RomaliPatro RomaliPatro Oct 02, 2016
tooo good till now..
                              the prologue itself attracted to think more about it....👌
RomaliPatro RomaliPatro Oct 02, 2016
thesee limes show th deep love fr th buddy she ever missed...
                              a single line can say a lot..
PepperAndMint PepperAndMint Jun 09, 2014
Can I copy this part and post it? 
                              This paragraph is DA BOMB
                              XD all I can say is, well written!
Iam_Echo Iam_Echo Jan 03, 2013
@Xx_honeybee_Xx yeah, it is the first time I posted a story here, but I've wrote this story since I was in freshmen high school. I just modified it. :) 
                              @XoSuperSweetoX why thank you I planned on making the summary good to attract readers. I'm glad you liked it.
                              Thanks for your support.
joooceeey joooceeey Jan 02, 2013
I just wanted to say that it was your summary that drew me in to read. Summaries are important after all. :) A good start.