Serenaded Sunflowers

Serenaded Sunflowers

1.4K Reads 56 Votes 11 Part Story
Khyra By vanilla_sunflowers22 Updated Nov 27, 2011

Santiago and Luke have been together for 2 years and are madly in love with each other. Fresh out of high school and off to the same college, their future together looks great.  But, balancing school, football, band,the college life,people trying to ruin their relationslip, and trying to find some time in there for each other, keeping their relationship as strong as it is becomes teribly hard.  Will they make it out of college even stronger than before, or will it crumble to pieces?

Kay-KAylalala Kay-KAylalala Aug 13, 2011
Very good so far! And i especially love it cuz the main character is half Boricua (; POWER TO THE MIXED BREEDS! PUERTO RICAN AND SOMETHING ELSE IS ALWAYS BETTER. Lol jkaay but yeah i like it :D
TheShadowThief TheShadowThief Mar 03, 2011
Oh wow, sorry this is so late, but WOW, this was a great beginning! Good job! :)
PolkaDot41 PolkaDot41 Feb 26, 2011
I thought it was really interesting throughout the whole chapter.  I didn't see any mistakes at all. You Rawk girl!! Can't wait 2 read more. :)
shopaholic889 shopaholic889 Feb 25, 2011
At first this was a little slow, but it's picking up.  Overall a nice start.
vanilla_sunflowers22 vanilla_sunflowers22 Feb 25, 2011
@Eviaan, i appreciate the critique.  honestly im just trying to make this story as good as it possibly can be, and i wouldnt mind at all reading your story.  might as well return the favor right???
Eviaan Eviaan Feb 24, 2011
haha i love it! it's so cute!! but just as a quick critique, it needs just a smidge more detail, but other than that it was fabulous! :D 
                              
                              would you mind reading mine and giving a little feedback too? I'd really appreciate it!