Framing and Entering

Framing and Entering

958 Reads 56 Votes 3 Part Story
Mitriel By Mitriel Completed

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  • short
  • story
  • thief
Really enjoyed the line about blood on the pages of the history books. Nicely done!
CliffHowell CliffHowell Apr 07, 2015
@CliffHowell and now I've noticed two more parts that I didn't see before :)
CliffHowell CliffHowell Apr 07, 2015
Just like your main character, you've given me just enough bait to bite on the story! I can't wait to see more.
Tirellan Tirellan Mar 09, 2015
Very sweetly done. Love the turns of phrase in the descriptions
Atlas-Skye Atlas-Skye Feb 25, 2015
An interesting concept for a character. You have a great way of describing appearances and personalities!
- - Feb 22, 2015
Astounding! You have presented crisp detail which makes it very easy to envision the environment.