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Ms. Tomboy is a CIA Agent

Ms. Tomboy is a CIA Agent

80.5K Reads 2.5K Votes 16 Part Story
Louie By Louie24eL Updated Apr 18, 2016

Valarie, a junior in high school. She lost her parents at a young age and was taken care off by her grandmother, who is the head of CIA division since Hillary's mom was still a young girl. Because she lost her mom and dad in a dangerous situation, she was taught how to fight since she was six years old. She was good. She then persuaded her grandmother to let her out into the world and do 'jobs'. Mostly because she wanted revenge for her parents but partly because she always wanted to do it. And she's good and cool at it.

But, not in school. NOPE! NO way! In school she's just the weird, loner, tomboy.

Naw, I'd just sit there and the ball would hit me smack in the face. (It's happened before sadly)
ClicheCritic ClicheCritic Jan 22, 2016
If this Is cliche,  it's gonna be zach. I hope not tho; ii like books that surprise me
___Brave ___Brave Dec 04, 2015
just pretend it's Mama from 'Raising Hope'. She can beat people up real bad! @unicorns_of_the_sea
bullshit_things bullshit_things Jul 06, 2015
It's so weird trying  to imagine the grandma in this situation, all I think is a fragile old lady
gheffner gheffner Jul 02, 2015
I like it so far. Have you thought about a list of chapters and where you want to build on the story line?
Courtz_Mac123 Courtz_Mac123 Jun 06, 2015
I think instead of telling the readers she had a nightmare about her parents death you should show it like write what happened in the dream.