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You Want Me. {Will never get edited}

You Want Me. {Will never get edited}

582K Reads 6.7K Votes 19 Part Story
Becca By whatsmyusername17 Completed

Brook is in love with her bestfriend Noah. Noah is a player and enjoys sex or really anything that has to do with girls and boobs. Brook is confused by the games Noah plays kissing her, cheesy pet names. Brook cant help but fall more and more in love with him each day. What will Brook do when she knows its all just a game? Or is it? What will Brook do when the world comes crashing down on her and she realizes that Noah doesnt care about anything they have been through at all? What happens when another guy comes to town? Will Brook find new feelings for someone else or will she always love Noah?   

Ps. This will never be edited. The grammar and spelling is awful. If you can't handle books with bad grammar and spelling then I would not read this.

Then there's me "no the only thing I want right now is these chips"
ChristyMiller649 ChristyMiller649 Apr 04, 2016
He seems to be serious when he tells her he wants her but is her
Dannyggirl333 Dannyggirl333 Jun 23, 2015
noah. noah riley? he's real. he is a family friend of a girl at my school. he lives in LA and his sister is a well known dance champion. lol that's interesting
Urbanis_Lit Urbanis_Lit Sep 06, 2014
aaawww she was the first thing he asked about.  maybe he does like her
XxReadingCriticxX XxReadingCriticxX Sep 25, 2012
love it,,, but oof! >.< those editing mistakes are really kinda.... 1st grade...? :/
LikaDaRomance LikaDaRomance Jun 14, 2012
I'm liking this already but some editing is needed. There were several grammatical mistakes that threw me off as I was reading however, it's still a great start.