You Want Me. {Editing}

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Becca By whatsmyusername17 Completed
Brook is in love with her bestfriend Noah. Noah is a player and enjoys sex or really anything that has to do with girls and boobs. Brook is confused by the games Noah plays kissing her, cheesy pet names. Brook cant help but fall more and more in love with him each day. What will Brook do when she knows its all just a game? Or is it? What will Brook do when the world comes crashing down on her and she realizes that Noah doesnt care about anything they have been through at all? What happens when another guy comes to town? Will Brook find new feelings for someone else or will she always love Noah?   Ps. This is undergoing editing very slowly, if you cannot stand horrible grammar and spelling mistakes i highly suggest not to read this until further notice
noah. noah riley? he's real. he is a family friend of a girl at my school. he lives in LA and his sister is a well known dance champion. lol that's interesting
aaawww she was the first thing he asked about.  maybe he does like her
love it,,, but oof! >.< those editing mistakes are really kinda.... 1st grade...? :/
I'm liking this already but some editing is needed. There were several grammatical mistakes that threw me off as I was reading however, it's still a great start.
H8 tht he leads her kn bt luv how they both tease each other n she gets back @ him XD
I like this story a lot, but maybe if you were more detailed and edited your stories it would be easier to read. Just a suggestion, I really like your story.