The Chosen.

The Chosen.

1.6K Reads 111 Votes 14 Part Story
Lauren Farrell By laurenfarrell1234 Updated Jul 30, 2013

Kite and her people are the production of thousands of years of change after earth was destroyed and re-born, her and her people have wings. While they think they are half-creatures of sin, that foresee a human changing their fates. A group of people of the same speicies called 'The Odisee' believe they are the next stage in evolution and will not risk a human destroying their power. Kite is thrown in the midst of the sectarianism as she feels connected to the newly found human. Will she risk everything for the sake of one human? Even if it risks loosing her wings?

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ZoellaLmao ZoellaLmao Jun 28, 2014
hey i raelly like the book and mine is quite similar you should check it out
Demz5luv Demz5luv Feb 17, 2013
ell very interesting concept and you've really tried to blend in the two worlds of humans and birds in both senses instead of going on for outright extermination of the human race and stuff that most people generally do.
                              I liked the way it flowed, nice work!
bastille bastille Feb 16, 2013
I liked this! An orginal fantasy good. Your wriing is good, but you had quite a few choppy, short sentences that should be added together to help it flow better. (:
LightSparrow LightSparrow Feb 15, 2013
I love this concept. I would have liked you to describe the buildings a little more as she approached the home tree. The introduction of a couple of characters and balancing their personalities with the flow of the story was well done. Really good chapter.
Freebreeze Freebreeze Feb 14, 2013
This is frickin interesting, if the quality of the book is maintained high then the originality and the plot will make this story so cool
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eavesdrop_ eavesdrop_ Feb 14, 2013
Oh, nice idea.  It's original, and I'm always up for a good fantasy read.  I love you cover for one, I like the chapter; it isn't too long, just a perfect bite-size.  Voted! :)