The Eyes I Seek In My Sleep

The Eyes I Seek In My Sleep

66 Reads 9 Votes 2 Part Story
Charley By SWDavid Updated Dec 13, 2012

Winnie and Nathaniel are two very different people in many way, yet similar in others.
Opposites do attract, but attraction isn't the only factor able to forge a relationship. 
These two may never get together with the multitude of obstacles approaching their way. 


Nathaniel's wealthy, high class, blue blood and a very successful business mogul. He approaches his goals with confidence and determination, completing a personal to do list each day.

Winnie's goals are one step at a time and are taking a long time too.                1: successful career. 2: comfortable, beautiful apartment. The other goals she'll work on after.

She'll snap up a great job opportunity and he'll be her boss.

  • adventure
  • badboy
  • boss
  • class
  • complications
  • love
  • society
Parkerdarestodream Parkerdarestodream Feb 25, 2013
Awesome! I cant wait for the next installment, I /really/ hope you will come back to writing this!
sahealey sahealey Dec 23, 2012
I'm so glad you continued with this story! This chapter demonstrates an easier flow of your writing, which gives the story a more authentic feel. Keep up the good work! Can't wait to see where you take the story from here.
sahealey sahealey Dec 13, 2012
By all means, yes, I think you should continue. You have some clever stuff written here. I especially loved the metaphor you used for Emma, describing her as broken tap. Good luck!
SWDavid SWDavid Dec 06, 2012
Thank you that's great encouragement :D I love your story the disreputable duke by the way :) x
Millieang Millieang Dec 06, 2012
Hi, yes I think you should continue.  This could be a great story. I like some of the descriptive pieces, the first part with the pizza delivery guy is good to read.  Rx