Secrets ➵ Dalton Rapattoni (DISCONTINUED)

Secrets ➵ Dalton Rapattoni (DISCONTINUED)

10.7K Reads 174 Votes 10 Part Story
R By relentlessloves Updated Dec 31, 2014

Lydia is a girl who is best friends with Cole from IM5 and goes on tour with them because she misses her best friend. She meets Dalton, Dana, Will and Gabe and unexpectedly falls in love with Dalton slowly everytime she sees him she falls a little more for him... Dalton falls for her too but she doesnt know that and he doesnt know that she is falling for him too.

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FragileLines FragileLines Dec 26, 2012
Really good!
                              
                              If you don't mind advice,  try Putting a new speaker on a different line. 
                              For example: 
                              
                              "Hi! How are you?" I asked
                              
                              "Hey Lucy! It's great to see you again! I'm doing great thanks, what about you?" He replied.