Once Upon A Time.....
This is an incredible poem. I love the articulation and the speech style.
This is one of the best works that I've seen on Wattpad :D
Beautiful job. Keep up the great work :D
@ARM179 Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! :) And I agree, there is somewhat of a lack in twisted or strange stories at the moment.
That was awesome. My mouth is gaping! Love it! So true, people don't write enough cracked stories these days. And I'm not talking about dark, creepy stories, I'm talking about twisted and strange ones. Great job!!! ^____^
A twisted fairytale indeed.... loved this poem, n its kinda true for today, good job!
From a perspective of like our generation now—THIS IS SO FLUCKIN TRUE. :) loved it!
It's great! The rhyming scheme and the flow of stanzas are very fluid and smooth. Might just want to fix a spelling mistake like "disconserting" should be spelled disconcerting. But nah! Just a little thing.