Stranger

Stranger

532 Reads 24 Votes 5 Part Story
Savannah Rytes By SavannahRytes Updated Dec 22, 2012

This place seems so empty and so forlorn and so far away from everywhere and everything and everyone. But I don’t seem to care. I feel I don’t need anyone else around me except this stranger. I feel I need to be with him only. He makes me feel like my heart’s every need can be met by him.
I am more curious now. My heart yearns to know him better. I am determined to do this. This is why he appeared, this is why we met out here where there are no distractions or by-ways.  So I quicken my steps and walk alongside him on this unknown journey.

Sarah_N_Dipity Sarah_N_Dipity Dec 06, 2012
@RoseCecily I agree 100%! This is absolutely astounding :) Not only do you beautifully capture a mystery feel, but you also create a sense of wonder to this stranger aswell :) I LOVE IT and can't wait for this epic journey to continue!!!
LilyAvenue LilyAvenue Dec 05, 2012
THIS IS FANTASTIC. 
                              It's so mysterious and enticing I'm not sure what to think yet, but I want to find out. SO BAAAAD. UPLOAD. PLEASE. When you can.
LilyAvenue LilyAvenue Dec 05, 2012
This is just so different, I love it, it truly intrigues the reader and makes me want to turn the page. Well done, reading on. POST MORE.
SavannahRytes SavannahRytes Dec 05, 2012
@RoseCecily Thank you. Be sure to keep reading, you'll be surprised.
RoseCecily RoseCecily Dec 05, 2012
I like the way you introduced this story with a poem of sorts. :D