Ghost Girl

Ghost Girl

437 Reads 14 Votes 8 Part Story
Jullienne Vilela By JulesVinela Updated Dec 29, 2012

Georgiana Ingrid Cory had always known that life wasn't perfect, but she gets a bombshell a whole lot bigger than what she expected. Finding out that she has always destined to be a ghost, she takes on the responsibilities and help lead people's lives to their right paths. However, there's a big price to pay; her loved ones. Her new life becomes chaotic filled with forbidden love, near-death experiences, betrayel, murder, envy and of course, ghosts.
From assessments and grades, her normal life is ceasing to exist. She is forced to believe almost everything she thought wasn’t true with new responsibilities thrown over her shoulders. She questions everything and everyone around her. Who can she trust? And who is she willing to sacrifice? 
 And right now, there are only two things that she is sure about. 
She is falling for her best friend’s fiancé,
And she must run away from everyone she loves because evil ghosts, the Haunters, want revenge. They are wreaking havoc everywhere and they will hunt for Georgiana down till the ends of the earth.

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LaDameBlanche LaDameBlanche Dec 08, 2012
It would be a good idea to put the dream sequence in italics to distinguish it from reality. A couple of little spelling mistakes but other wise well written, good luck with the rest of the story, voted.
LaDameBlanche LaDameBlanche Dec 08, 2012
Hi, an interesting start to your story. In the prologue I think you meant she was "ecstatic"  not aethestic. I didn't think the first chapter was boring at all, and a little editing could sharpen it up so it moves quicker. Well done, voted.