This Side of the Wall

This Side of the Wall

114 Reads 20 Votes 2 Part Story
Madeline Geniva By MadelineGeniva Completed

When Aerie wakes up in the morning, all she can hear is her brother yelling. at school, all she can hear is her mother's screams that seem to be on infinitive replay in her head. She struggles to cage them up and lock them away with every other one of those memories that makes her heart pound and her knees weaken. Her days are filled with pushing away the past and avoiding the future. But right when she is caught up in the emotions that came to drown her, she discovers something amazing. something so covered in centuries of hiding and lies that it should be impossible to uncover. can the unraveling of other's secrets help her find the truth in herself, or will she be lost in them forever?

RynoWriter1 RynoWriter1 Feb 02, 2013
This is very well-written with great descriptions! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. There were a few errors, but nothing major. You did a really good job! Keep up the work!
hbrAuthor hbrAuthor Feb 02, 2013
Your work s well written, your a great writer keep it up!!!!
carelesskids carelesskids Feb 02, 2013
well written, just a few minor errors but you've portrayed the characters really well and this whole chapter is full of different emotions which gets the reader really into it, good job, voted :-)
AllisonAnne AllisonAnne Feb 01, 2013
i love how you describe everything. It's like i'm inside her head and can feel exactly what she does, and i don't get that from a lot of characters.This was great! voted!
hersheykisswriter hersheykisswriter Feb 01, 2013
The descriptions were so amazing!! This seems really interesting so far, and I can't wait to read more!
                              
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seaca123 seaca123 Feb 01, 2013
I liked the beginning paragraph, how you can relate to how she feels in the morning, aha. Good writing!:)