My Pride, His Prejudice

My Pride, His Prejudice

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Jenni James By JenniJames Completed

My Pride His Prejudice

Copyright©Jenni James 2014




CHAPTER ONE:

**THIS BOOK HAS BEEN EDITED EXTENSIVELY.  PLEASE DO NOT REVIEW OR RATE THIS BOOK ON THIS ROUGH DRAFT VERSION.  THIS BOOK IS NOW PUBLISHED AND AVAILABLE WHEREVER EBOOKS ARE SOLD WITH THE EDITED VERSION.  YOU CAN READ THE IMPROVED BOOK THERE.  THANK YOU SO MUCH AND ENJOY MY ROUGH DRAFTS AS I WRITE THEM.  ALWAYS PLEASE REMEMBER I'M ALLOWING YOU, THE READER, INTO MY HEAD AS I ORIGINALLY COME UP WITH THESE STORIES. THESE ROUGH DRAFTS ARE NOT PERFECT, NOR WERE THE INTENDED TO BE.  This is just something fun I do for my fans as a thank you for all your love.  I let you see the books before they're perfect.**




"Excuse me?  What did you say?" Eliza's heart rate tripled as she nervously flipped her long blond hair over her shoulder.  How in the world could this be happening? Nothing made sense.  Nothing.

The handsome man knelt down upon one knee in front of her and reached into his chest pocket.  "I was saying-"

"No!"  She...

Empress_Cheese Empress_Cheese Apr 26, 2015
@LisaMcGeeMunk Yeah, I though that to. I thought the book was a sequel and I had missed something. Wait, did I?
LisaMcGeeMunk LisaMcGeeMunk Mar 16, 2015
Jumped right in...I'd say that's the truth.  As I was reading I thought I had missed the first half of the book.  I'm good with starting this way though -it's intriguing
barbiegirl barbiegirl Mar 15, 2015
Gosh, Austen's version was epic and your modern rendition is going to be awesome!
gcrsvg gcrsvg Mar 12, 2015
He proposed to her.......and they weren't dating?? What... lol. That's odd.
Leronay Leronay Feb 18, 2015
Well, I like it! A retelling does not have to follow the initial plot in my opinion - and I think it's quite good that she isn't the one to first fall in love with him.
                              
                              I also think (or what you tried to show) he needed a rejection or something like that... I think.
                              
                              Anyway, good job! Gambare.
Azumishtera-chan Azumishtera-chan Feb 17, 2015
is this a new adult? wow this first chapter is good! i can't wait for the next....