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Memories of Jack & Eliza (BWWM)

Memories of Jack & Eliza (BWWM)

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Kobi By Irresistiblyclever Completed

All Eliza needed was some wine to set the mood. Her favorite kind of wine, and though the situation was tense, wine would cool her down. Jack was determined to get some, but the roads were kinda slick on the            surprisingly February day. However,  all you need is one slip up.

 Jack was hit by a car and is doomed to a coma for 6 months. Eliza is there every day to wait for the time when, the love of her life is conscious. His brain is mute but not his memories When Eliza picks up his journal to spend the time, she reads his memories. More like theirs: Memories of Jack and Eliza.

In French they usually say "Je m'appelle" then the name ......
In French the informal way is more like "Ok Jack, tu n'as aucune idée de combien tu es mignon..." rather than the formal way that you've used  and which is more like "Ok Jack, vous n'avez aucune idée de combien vous êtes mignon..."
LaurenBillups LaurenBillups Jul 22, 2015
I like the synopsis and the plot behind this. Very interesting and good!
KarinetteChocolate KarinetteChocolate Jun 23, 2015
Hi there. I'm french, and well. This translation doesn't make sense to me...
                              "la prochaine fois mon mignong, vas sur youtube or choisis espagnol" is more accurate.
BubbleButt4lyfe BubbleButt4lyfe Feb 22, 2015
I love how your story is going so far, keep up the good work!