An Angel Story

An Angel Story

185 Reads 8 Votes 1 Part Story
Ar52384 By Ar52384 Updated Dec 05, 2012

Go through Gail's view on this incredible journey she will undertake.

Ar52384 Ar52384 Mar 03, 2013
@KadeeliaMitchell Thank you so much! I will let you know as soon as I update, your story is amazing too.  I already have my heart loving Shoji
OsmosiaLee OsmosiaLee Mar 03, 2013
End of chapter 2 page 12 and chapter 3 page 12-13
                              
                              Literally face palm and moth dropped!
                              She is dead! Aww...now I am crying! This s just sad. I really look forward to this story. Please message me when you have an update. I am really happy that I read this.
OsmosiaLee OsmosiaLee Mar 03, 2013
chapter 2 page 10-11 review
                              
                              Stilll shocked even now!! I wonder who are these people? What do they want with her? So many unanswered questions!
Ar52384 Ar52384 Mar 03, 2013
Alright, thanks.  I am of course still writing this story.  And yes, I am very glad I surprised you!
Ar52384 Ar52384 Mar 03, 2013
@KadeeliaMitchell Yes, I have tried to put much detail packed into this story
OsmosiaLee OsmosiaLee Mar 03, 2013
Page 10 review- end of chapter 1
                              
                              Whoa!!! You got me there! Had no idea chapter 2 was in here. Had no idea this was a fantasy either! You could have fooled me! I am reallly shocked!! You did a good job with this but I think you should have 4 or 3 pages so readers wont be turned away, okay?