Viewer Discretion is Advised

Viewer Discretion is Advised

380 Reads 6 Votes 7 Part Story
Tell them stories By tellthemstories Updated Dec 07, 2012

This is the story of a 17 year old deranged sociopath with an intense desire to kill.
It's my first story and the first draft. So if it's bad, I'll try to improve it, please leave suggestions for me :)
And also, since this is the rough draft, once I go back to edit, scenes will be more graphic and descriptive.

  • abuse
  • murder
  • sexual
  • torture
Incoherent Incoherent Dec 14, 2012
Amazing start..even for a 'draft' as you mentioned this is great! :D Intriguing..me likey likey ;P
DK_Perrie DK_Perrie Dec 13, 2012
oooooh...such grisly detail...shouldn't this be under horror? :D
tellthemstories tellthemstories Dec 12, 2012
@CaoimheGrace Thanks for the feedback! I was really worried about people liking this one :)
CaoimheGrace CaoimheGrace Dec 12, 2012
I really like this and I don't know why lol.
                              I feel connected to the character, like I can relate and -Nah I'm just kidding :L but seriously this is really good. You showed his craziness well.