Hourglass: Angelic Immortals 1

Hourglass: Angelic Immortals 1

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You Will Never Know By Mara-James Updated Jul 29, 2013

Jia Willowfelh is a normal girl--until the night she ends up on a mysterious beach and is jumped by a gruesome monster. When she wakes up on a little fishing island with no idea how she got there, Jerome, a Jamaican man, finds her passed out on his boat dock. She soon finds out that she is an Angelic Immortal, someone touched by an Angel and made immortal. The mysterious man takes her to a Nephilim House--a place where half-angels and Immortals are trained and learn how to fight and defeat their enemies. But when one of the Immortals' sister turns up after several years of being thought dead, she's working for someone else--someone no one thought a bad guy. Now Jia and her friends must discover how to free the girl from her possession--and kill the mastermind behind everything that's going wrong.

Mara-James Mara-James Dec 15, 2012
@Alex844 Yay! You can always pick out my Jace-type characters. I modeled Jace after Jace, actually, combined with his own personality. Kind of a tuned-down version of Jace. I'm glad you enjoy it.
Mara-James Mara-James Dec 15, 2012
@Alex844 Lol, yeah, I do that too. It's like "How the hell did I never hear about this before?!" Thank you very much. I'm glad you like it.
acwyatt acwyatt Dec 13, 2012
Jade sounds like a Jace-y type character. Not like totally like Jace, but sarcastic and witty and stuff. The bad ass one. This seems quite interesting :)
acwyatt acwyatt Dec 13, 2012
this is cool. Sorry I hadn't started reading this until now, because this story seems really really cool :)
Mara-James Mara-James Dec 13, 2012
@Silvery_Blue_Flames I'm glad you like it. And no, I'm not, it's just a word that popped into my mind. My knowledge of Italian is like microscopic.
Silvery_Blue_Flames Silvery_Blue_Flames Dec 09, 2012
well, it would figure you picked a bow and Arrow for your character. I like Lex, he sounds like he's cute. I cant wait till the nest chapter, au revoir