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Bianca By Beeonka Updated Dec 05, 2012

"Tell us Michelle, Will it or will it not be Blood." His dark and  raspy voice growled. His question was not a choice. His intimidating raven black eyes that looked like it was always dilated said 'If It's not blood, I will give you pain.' I was a worthless coward. I had stepped back and bowed my head. 

"Blood it is" His voice filled with pure satisfaction as he turned away from me, leaving with his leather shoes clinking loud against the blood filled floor. 

I didn't have a choice. I was trapped forever... I was lost in a giant forest and every path I took..I would end up in that same place. But I was not going to give up...I was going to find a away--I was going to escape and I'm willing to take the risk.

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  • die
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  • forest
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  • war
God_Its_Jackson God_Its_Jackson Jan 10, 2014
I like it. I feel like you've gotten better at writing than myself. Hell, You've always been better. You just need to stick through it and finish this one, Please. I was gonna read Veiled, and I was on the second chapter. But it said you had removed it :/