With Love From Beyond

With Love From Beyond

6.6K Reads 241 Votes 16 Part Story
Adam Gary By AdamGaryauthor Completed

A young girl named Claire and her family inherit an old English manor house; though things aren't quite what they should be.

Book cover: creation of breanak


  • conspiracy
  • council
  • demon
  • demons
  • forbidden
  • friends
  • ghost
  • ghosts
  • haunted
  • love
  • manor
  • mystery
  • relationship
  • romance
  • romantic
  • spell
  • strange
  • supernatural
  • teen
  • twilight
  • wizard
warwounds warwounds Mar 26, 2013
I love your writing style. Dark. Errie. I absolutely love it. Your choice of words couldn't be better and the flow is smooth (which is often hard to achieve in writing) It's well written and flawless. I don't think I can't criticize it :D Great job!!! And beautifully done!!!!
AdamGaryauthor AdamGaryauthor Mar 26, 2013
@AirborneToxicEvent no way?! That's good news!
                               @BubblyPenguin thanks!! Glad you was able to make a connection! Always nice to get feedback!
BubblyPenguin BubblyPenguin Mar 26, 2013
First chapter was amazing. I liked how you set this really dark, moody tone (well, at least from what I've interpreted) and then left us off at a cliffhanger. It makes me want to read more. I voted and can't wait to start of Ch. 2! :)
ILoveYou_Not ILoveYou_Not Mar 21, 2013
This is amazing!  You are such an amazing writer!  This definitely earned my vote! :D
trevortni trevortni Mar 07, 2013
                              It's just beyond word 
                              The story captured me
                              Hope to read more every wenesday :)
speedeereader speedeereader Mar 04, 2013
You have a gift with words. Such a poetic opening, I love it. I agree with fruitcup, this is an exception to a large percentage of the stories here.