OK GUYS KAISER IS GONNA WRITE A STORY IN THE STORY. GET?
THERE WILL BE LEMONS
READER X ANY
FREDDY X ANY
BONNIE X ANY
FOXY X ANY
CHICA X ANY
AND BLAH BLAH BLAH
not horrible for a first time although some more details would be better
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm wtf did i just witness, im a cupcake, i lost my inocnce
okay i really like it i mean your on the right track but here's the thing try not to start out your story so strong i know its easier that way but it lacks depth (pun intended) give them some character you could literally make a million different stories with the same plot just different names
WTF? I would rather have Freddy X me... Which is a book I am making so ya!
All haters suck a fried Dick bitches
....I really wanted to say that....
Love the story so far but please try using better grammer PLEEAASSEE