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Fallen For Good

Fallen For Good

102K Reads 3.7K Votes 23 Part Story
Madhurima By Tupa96 Updated Jul 21, 2016

Meet Ariana Haydon, a 24 year old carefree girl, as she moves to New York to finally start her life as an independent woman. She is excited for her new job as  assistant to Mr. Dylan Acker, CEO of Ackers Pvt Ltd.
      Meet Dylan Acker, a haughty businessman, who has nothing else in his mind other than money. He is rude, arrogant and never spends a dime of his time to bother about anyone else, but himself.
           Dylan is caught off guard by Arianas' simple and carefree attitude. He wants to take care of her, protect her but is afraid of losing her, like he lost his parents and his little brother at the age of 15. Will Ariana break the walls created by Dylans past or his fear will take over him and seperate them?

Emerald1405 Emerald1405 Aug 22, 2016
Every time you refer to yourself as I in writing, it should be capitalized
JaqDimbu JaqDimbu Jul 04, 2016
I loved it... It's a very good beginning. 
                              It would be very nice to read more elaborated frases and paragraphs about the details she sees and hear... As how was the building when she first entered it