The girl with powers

The girl with powers

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#CrazyFangirl By -_Hermione_- Updated Nov 26

16 year old Jo is in for the ride of her life. Witches? Real? No way. Jo has never heard or been told about her past. And she wants to know why. What will happen when she tries to find out more? What surprises await Jo in her adventure to find out her past? Read to find out.

U left it with a nice cliff hanger,  which was great.  But ur lack of editing is starting to seriously take my concentration away from the book itself
Hi just letting you know author. It would be easier to read and more fluent if you used paragraphs .awesome book!!😉