The Alphas Abused Mate #Wattys2017

The Alphas Abused Mate #Wattys2017

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Cyndel Fouts By Cyndel_Fouts Updated Oct 29

Hello there, my name's Ali and this is my story.
I was six when my mom died. It was the worst day of my little life. Her death hurt my dad the worst though. His entire life changed and he made mine hell. At first I thought I was doing something wrong, but then I realized I wasn't and didn't understand why he was hurting me. I was sad and confused of what had happened to my mom. Since then I always thought I was the cause of my mother's death.... little did I know that was not the truth. 

                      ~Cyndel Fouts
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  • abuse
  • loss
  • love
  • mates
  • moongoddess
  • special
  • war
  • wattys2017
  • wolf
Hello, 
                              
                              Here I am checking your story as promised. 
                              
                              Well, the story has potential, but your description of the events is kind of rushed. You should work on that. 
                              
                              Other than that, 
                              Keep it up, 
                              La_Rose_Semsem
emmonono emmonono May 22, 2016
she says "father" but he IS her father whether she likes it or not. his' sperm = same blood = father and daughter relationship. sad but true. @CyndelFouts1998
bvbshewolf bvbshewolf Oct 10, 2016
Yes! Finally a good alpha that dosnt kill people who trespass on there lands!!
wolves_luver101 wolves_luver101 Nov 20, 2016
So her dad is a real nasty Alpha who as going to let her get raped by his buddies what a sleeze
Cyndel_Fouts Cyndel_Fouts Sep 18, 2015
Keep reading they are in there I have to edit the first few chapters