call me love, not alpha (boyxboy)

call me love, not alpha (boyxboy)

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Phan girl By comic_master Completed

Nathan was always at the back of the pack, he was not small or anything and all the girls want too get under his skin but he was the alphas mate.

he had rejected the alpha for Nathan is straight and does not want to be with the alpha and will do anything to stay away even parties.

that's when alpha drake saves him from a guy who jumped him, Nathan starts too notice how gentle drake really is.

Nathan helplessly falls in love with drake but is too afraid too come out too drake and counting too reject him but drake knows he fell for him and is not giving up on him so easy.

I really like it! Though (I'm not trying to be mean) I think it might be better if you edited. It has a lot of potential! 
                              All in all, Awesome job!
Omega8 Omega8 Jun 05
I don't mean to offend you, but this book needs some serious editing. It's a great storyline, but there are a lot of spelling and grammatical errors.
Yeah, right. Of course you dont want him... -serious case of sarcasm in those sentences-
You sound like u care about them a lot. That is great. Just never turn your back on them. Like my so called "best friends" did to me
Hi I added a few chapters to the story you added to incomplete
ya know, the plot was seriously awesome and i really wanted to continue reading but.... the grammar and words are wrong at times so they dampened my interest quite a lot.
                              hope u can somehow edit the story one day