The Assassin's Story

The Assassin's Story

76.7K Reads 581 Votes 24 Part Story
Kathleen By FindingGrace Completed

'One day they will write stories about you Archer. They will write about this journey, and all of the lucky souls that got to join you. Each time their tale might change but the same idea will remain. Archer you have done something Kings, noblemen, the poor, and Knights dream about, you have become a hero.'                       ~Alexander

ZakAgent21 ZakAgent21 Dec 06, 2015
Pretty good opening for a first story.  Gives the impression of an awesome plot comming up.
tAngierine tAngierine Jan 22, 2015
I see potential in this tale, but something about the grammar and wording really throws me off. Try reading it aloud to yourself once you finish, pausing at the commas, and tweak it a bit?
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DCProductions DCProductions Aug 06, 2012
Its really good, but one thing that distracted me was in every sentance you started with "He" which was really annoying. Try to maybe take out some of those :) other than that your good! :D Very good story and lots of potential!
xSquidzyx xSquidzyx Aug 10, 2011
I should probably start reading this. Well I am, and it's really good so far!
JMason0206 JMason0206 Jan 02, 2011
This is really great!  Its not just your average everyday fantasty novel - I love it - I can't wait to read more!  I wanted to at least take a peak while I had some down time.  I'm totally stoked!  So on I read!  Can't wait : D