One Man Show

One Man Show

672 Reads 24 Votes 3 Part Story
m0rky_mf By m0rky_mf Updated Aug 21, 2010

Louis Charmengarf, head investigator of Dawnspring's police department wakes up a phonecall from a cop friend. He informs him about a murder that occured during the rainy night in the woods. A young couple was bruttaly murdered and now Louis has to solve the case. But is it that simple?

yesandnobutok yesandnobutok Dec 14, 2010
Oh jeeze. I was very close to vomiting. No joke. I didn't though. :) Which is good. I do like this story. :D
ClioSup ClioSup Nov 24, 2010
The overall exciting part, in my opinion, is the little details...picturing the situation where the man is under pressure, suffers from ptsd (post traumatic stress disorder) and all this behind a pair of green eyes...
                              Describing the plot and the character is inspired!
juppjupp juppjupp Aug 10, 2010
@m0rky_mf  Oh yeeaaaahhhh. Hehe sorry, I'm seriously out of these days. My brain feels like mush -_- I thought I read, "it proved to be none of those seven boys" but it was actually, "it proved to be not one but seven boys" bahahaha. My bad :D
m0rky_mf m0rky_mf Aug 08, 2010
@juppjupp lol wait... What? Where do I say that? I don't remember writing they are innocent! I really need to fix that mistake!! Please respond to me asap and tell me where I say that
m0rky_mf m0rky_mf Aug 03, 2010
@nicollettenikki thanks for the good words there Nikki! Hehe. 
m0rky_mf m0rky_mf Aug 03, 2010
@juppjupp then enlighten me with your awesome grammar knowledge cause it looks I really need some help. From now on you will be my editor and grammar corrector?? Lol.