Intriguing Curiosity

Intriguing Curiosity

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Bells✨ By dxrlinng Updated Dec 13, 2015

"You're the weak one. And you'll never know love, or friendship. And I feel sorry for you."

Daisy Ambroise is a transfer student from Beauxbatons, per arranged by her politically involved parents. The world had often seemed so small. So black and white. Upon the time a dark haired boy with the god-complexed personality and the hardened gaze went her way, the world saw shades of silver, grey, and shreds of golden-greens throughout itself in what seemed like an endless tunnel of curiosity.  
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Im really enjoying your writing, its a really good story but i really think it wuld ve so much better with Capital letters. Its just a bit jarrig reading without it like if you all the full stops out xx
ABBY_RUE ABBY_RUE Jan 09
Please capitalize the first word of the sentence and split the chapter into paragraphs.