Burning Alive

Burning Alive

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Helios By Gunther_West Updated Nov 16

I am being punished for the crime I didn't commit. 

Tortured for the faults I've never done. 

I watched the people close to me move away and looked at me with distaste. With pure hatred. 

I watched the only person who loved me grow to hate me with great passion. 

They took everything from me. 

And now look at me, look at what you've all done. What you all made me become, for burning me alive. 

~.~.~.~

Don't chu worry guys. It won't be clichè 
Read it. 

There's hot guys inside ;)

(Shouldn't have said that because that's obviously objectifying men. I'm sorry my fellow co-ding dongs!)

Fukiya Fukiya Nov 22
The best YA heroes are always traumatized early in life. Save yo kids, ppl.
Fukiya Fukiya Nov 22
well you could always lie down and wait for death. I heard he's an arse but at least you wON'T BE WHIPPED.
alizaworm alizaworm Apr 05
Its a good book. Don't stop uodating because its hardbreaking to see a good idea go to waste.
wadashah wadashah Mar 16
Is it bad that after "...my wounds were sizzling meat on a hot oil." I read , "I gritted my teeth in pan" instead of pain.
I LOVE HIM ALREADY. ANYONE WHO GIVES ME FOOD, ESPECIALLY CHOCOLATE, DONUTS OR PIZZA, WINS THEY WAY TO MY HEART.
00crossfire 00crossfire Mar 21
In the plus side at least now her pain tolerance is really high. So when she's hurt she should be like "nothing compared to what I get daily"