This story is about everyone's lives after the SAO and ALO incidents. Showing how everyone is coping with new life. This story mainly revolves around Asuna and Kirito. But there will be appearances of other people too.
Serious question because I am a noob... Why do they say Kirito-kun and asuna-San?
I like the story, but the way you tell it is kinda weird. Just a few grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors. I'd say pratice a little more than you'd be good to go.