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Patient 1543 (1543 Series Story 1)

Patient 1543 (1543 Series Story 1)

20.3K Reads 997 Votes 6 Part Story
Michael Hall By MichaelHallWritting Completed

Harry Mel is a recently divorced psychiatrist, who has been working for twelve years at Scranton Mental Asylum. In his years, he'd never before had a patient who had intense homicidal tendencies, nor had he treated a patient who had intense an impulsion to commit violence against other; but even if he had it would've never prepared him for his new patient. A patient who was transferred from Palmerton Mental Hospital, who has the body reminisce of someone who survived a Nazi concentration camp. A patient with no past, and no identity; a patient that is only identified by four numbers: 1543. A patient with unnatural icy blue eyes, and supernatural powers; a patient who is more than he seems.

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In Patient 1543, Michael Hall sets the profile for his writing and his stylistic tendencies. Using potent horror and incredibly detailed descriptions, Michael paints his picture of terror and horror. In Michael's opinion this is one of the best stories he's written to date.

i have a feeling "his ways" is actually satan speaking to him.
TheGwen2903 TheGwen2903 May 30, 2016
In this paragraph, it says 'never the least', and should say 'at the very least'. ;) Is it ok that I point out stuff? :-)
queenofcurlie queenofcurlie Aug 08, 2016
Does Patient 1543 remind anyone of Sherlock Homes (from the t.v. series Sherlock) ?? Just me then😂
Littlepig13 Littlepig13 Sep 10, 2016
It takes a lot for me to get interested in a story or book but oh my God so far this is great!
KatrinePaul KatrinePaul Jun 12, 2016
A psycho spreading insanity and terror. Oh this should be good!
                              *Laughs evilly*
ToxicRavenLover ToxicRavenLover Sep 18, 2016
Well I do this all the time I wouldn't really call it mentaaallll.....