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City Kiddy, Meet Mountain Brat (bxb)

City Kiddy, Meet Mountain Brat (bxb)

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mephistoland By mephistoland Updated Nov 10, 2016

Seventeen year old Max moves with his mother way out in the mountains and in with her boyfriend. Determine to adapt to the new environment, Max befriend Clayton, the boyfriends son. What happens when Max falls for Clayton, or when life takes a turn for the worst? will they make is through or will the worst get the better of them?

mollybulbs mollybulbs Apr 11
This is great so far👀👌but as you said you might need to proofread some of it
mephistoland mephistoland Oct 08, 2015
Yay! I'm glad to hear it! Thanks for checking it out!!! I hope you keep liking it lmao
divine_night divine_night Jul 26, 2015
or I could bury my face into your chest and inhale your musk and maybe possibly frick frack but that's cool too
sanmariano sanmariano Jul 17, 2015
Very good chapter. Clayton is a terrific character. His look is dynamic, his personality cool, his dialogue expressive. Very distinct and original. Poor Max. He'll fall hard, eh?
sanmariano sanmariano Jul 17, 2015
Nice intro, sort of like a gothic. Will the house be haunted, or just a hot dude to interest Max? Or both?
quillin quillin Mar 01, 2015
Found a way to get the info out but made it seem realistic. Good job (imho).