My Bully

My Bully

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Saya Love By Love-Saya-Chan Completed

Naomi is a shy timid girl. Almost all her life she's been bully. Even after her parents passed away. She's the personal toy of Jay. He is the one who had made her life miserable. But after he graduated things where bad, but then got good. Than a year later he comes back. And things turn for the worse. Or maybe not. Jay is trying his best to have Naomis' forgiveness, but it's hard when he has problems. He can't express his love for her. It always ends up with aggressive. How can he show her he loves her? Can Naomi trust him enough to let him have her heart?
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do the school have to wait for a person/student to go visit the hospital in order to stop thing .
                              
                              they should have done it earlier before she lead herself in the hospital
EmOticon360 EmOticon360 Aug 19
It's a good first chapter but there are some spelling errors and mixed tenses.