That Girl (A Derek Hale Love Story)

That Girl (A Derek Hale Love Story)

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Nobody watches By Nobody_watches Updated Jan 02, 2013

Haylie is a beautiful, young girl, she owns the high school, but falls into the shadows once she meets the dangerous derek hale, she thinks she's falling but she cant bring herself to admit that the man she may trust is a man that threatens her life. read the story to find out how Haylie balences her brother her friends and her own fears about the world she thought she knew.
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LoveHeartBaby LoveHeartBaby May 29, 2015
I don't like people who think they are better than other people or don't treat their brother or sister kindly. Seriously is popularity is all u care about
Wow0Wow Wow0Wow Dec 29, 2012
Great start to the story, I can't wait to see how it develops!
TriaTheCraziestDuo TriaTheCraziestDuo Dec 01, 2012
Great start, i'm not a major fan of fan fictions although since i don't really know who derek hale is #blush, i like it. HAppy writing
XxshootingstarX XxshootingstarX Dec 01, 2012
It starts off really strong which brings attention to the book. :) The part where the dad is yelling is very intriguing which I enjoy. The only thing is that your story cover creeps you out slightly, I'm just not to keen on the blood. Other then that great job!
Punkish_Flower Punkish_Flower Nov 29, 2012
good job i liked it! my favoret part is when her dad is yelling at Stiles!<3 keep going it's really good!:3
peptobisharry peptobisharry Nov 29, 2012
I like how this story started :D your a really good author.. good luck !!