Just a touch (sasunaru)

Just a touch (sasunaru)

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crazyfreakdeath By crazyfreakdeath Completed

sasuke and naruto are mermaids who have not met yet when they meet what will happen

  • bondage
  • boyxboy
  • bxb
  • dbsm
  • fanfiction
  • fantasy
  • mermaid
  • murder
  • romance
angrydevil angrydevil Feb 15, 2015
Was doing so good, u are reverting back to script mode again. Just rephrase it and it should be fine. :3
tavi8crimsonrose tavi8crimsonrose Feb 15, 2015
What's gonna happen when he finds out you killed his baa - chan and countless others? Not gonna be so hot then are you sasuke? huh what I couldn't hear you ...that's what I thought you messed up once more!
crazyfreakdeath crazyfreakdeath Feb 10, 2015
@angrydevil no I like the way you put it I will try to make my character more natural
angrydevil angrydevil Feb 10, 2015
@angrydevil I left out some word, "Don't slap formation B at the end, make it a parting note or something or make Tsubeda or whatever her name is explain it to us"
tavi8crimsonrose tavi8crimsonrose Feb 10, 2015
@crazyfreakdeath  it was really good  stat I really wanna see what happens next