.:Legacy:. of Greed, Lies, Hate, and Love [no vampires required]

.:Legacy:. of Greed, Lies, Hate, and Love [no vampires required]

8 Part Story 1.7K Reads 51 Votes
Jaide By maddiejaide Updated Sep 08, 2010

The world has never been an understandable place for Hazel Knowles, this average high school girl.  However, things get a little more incomprehensible Hazel's senior year when she is introduced into a whole new reality of darkness, evil, and danger - where love lurks at every deadly corner.  Now that she knows both the truths and lies of this world, can Hazel figure out who and what is real? Now susceptible in this new dimension of Demons&Angels, Good&Evil, Dark&Light - Hazel is torn in a ferocious battle of Greed, Lies, Hate, and Love.

That was REALLY good!
                                  However, you asked for a critic...so here goes!
                                  But, to be honest, all I can think to say is to stop using the "enter" button so frequently - the huge spaces make it hard to read.
                                  Overall, though, it's fantastic, and you should definitely keep going with this!
maddiejaide maddiejaide Aug 18, 2010 04:49PM
@bookaddict1243
                                  
                                  Yeshh, he is the guy from the night before. Ill try to clear it up :)
maddiejaide maddiejaide Aug 18, 2010 04:42PM
@bookaddict1243  Ahh Im so happy! :)) I will be writing more soon, and maybe even a little dedicating in the next chapter *wink wink*
maddiejaide maddiejaide Aug 10, 2010 04:48AM
@lylaBITEZx
                                  
                                  Hey just a quick question.  Do you get a notification when I add to a chapter? Or just when I make a new one?
maddiejaide maddiejaide Aug 10, 2010 12:07AM
@lylaBITEZx
                                  
                                  Alright, sweet. Im about to post more :)
                                  
                                  Thanks for checking it out!,
                                  mee