.:Legacy:. of Greed, Lies, Hate, and Love [no vampires required]

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Jaide By maddiejaide Updated 5 years ago
The world has never been an understandable place for Hazel Knowles, this average high school girl.  However, things get a little more incomprehensible Hazel's senior year when she is introduced into a whole new reality of darkness, evil, and danger - where love lurks at every deadly corner.  Now that she knows both the truths and lies of this world, can Hazel figure out who and what is real? Now susceptible in this new dimension of Demons&Angels, Good&Evil, Dark&Light - Hazel is torn in a ferocious battle of Greed, Lies, Hate, and Love.
That was REALLY good!
                                    However, you asked for a critic...so here goes!
                                    But, to be honest, all I can think to say is to stop using the "enter" button so frequently - the huge spaces make it hard to read.
                                    Overall, though, it's fantastic, and you should definitely keep going with this!