Insanity

Insanity

1.9K Reads 203 Votes 22 Part Story
Ashley Pellinen By Ashley_890 Completed

They're stronger, faster, and have better hearing than a normal human. Their amazing hearing makes up for their lack of smell and their bad eyesight. They aren't zombies. They're more like mutants. They've been roaming this earth for about a year now, and I've been escaping their wrath for about a year now. I'm Ash Princeton and this is my horrible, messed up life.

Tvlover2014 Tvlover2014 May 11
As a suggestion, please break up long chunks of texts! Also you do not want your dialogue to blend with the story and details.
Tvlover2014 Tvlover2014 May 11
It really is easy to get lost when the dialogue and story is mushed together.
Tvlover2014 Tvlover2014 May 11
This is very engaging ☺️. Could you please break up the paragraphs please?