A Witch's Tale

A Witch's Tale

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Randi By RandiRavenous Updated Nov 11

Antisocial wasn't quite the word for Malanishka, more as anti-human. If it wasn't for her mother and sister, Taliana, she would be all alone. It made being witches not so bad when she had her family by her side. So what happens when her older sister goes to leave, threatening to change their whole world? Well of course she would go after her. However getting kidnapped wasn't part of the plan.

The infamous captain Darren O'Connor wasn't known for being the woman's type, nor did he care to be. He was born for the sea. So when he heard about a pirate ship full of stolen treasure from a peculiar woman who brazenly entered the bar, he couldn't help but be ready for the chase. Though when he should be focusing on his crew and ship, why do his eyes keep trailing off to the feminine looking boy, Lan?

A tale about love, loss, adventure and much much more!

Pronouncing such a large word for a name is a little hard, not at all saying its a bad name
PinkxStar PinkxStar Jul 14, 2015
I like how the sentences are structured, but I think it's just a little too long. It's written really good! I enjoyed it :)
Accidental_Genius Accidental_Genius Mar 30, 2015
A good beginning. Well described.. Just a bit of nags here and there in sentences. The story idea is awesome. It kinda puts off readers. Anyways a good story keep it up.. ;)..
-Lumi- -Lumi- Mar 29, 2015
Very descriptive. I sense great things from this story and I can really understand your characters. :)
celestial_hearts celestial_hearts Mar 19, 2015
This is very interesting so far! You develop the setting and characters well. The plot seems unique!
RandiRavenous RandiRavenous Feb 28, 2015
It's subtle because it wasn't specifically written that she left but it was implied. She got up from her chair and then the next part was mentions that they let her go to the forest. Thanks for pointing that out, I could have made that a little more clear.