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Virtual Attraction

Virtual Attraction

15.2K Reads 883 Votes 18 Part Story
inastarrysky98 By inastarrysky98 Updated May 29, 2016

Seventeen-year-old Blaze Allen just wants to get through her last few years of high school trouble-free, after spending the past two years in a correctional program for Juvenile Delinquents. It's a long story. Now she's the new student at Manhattan Dalton Academy, an upstate school for rich kids. With a chronic stutter and zero social life, she's spent one too many Friday nights home alone watching I Love Lucy re-runs. But when she stumbles upon a popular writing website called Fable, she finds a whole community of introverts just like her. And more specifically, a strange guy, who just won't leave her alone...maybe she doesn't really want him to.

darkeyes11 darkeyes11 Apr 18, 2016
I feel bad for Blaze. Nobody has the right to insult anyone for what they are. 
                              I hope Adam regrets this in the future. 
                              The chapter was well written and detailed. Nice work ! 😊
blare_lina blare_lina Jan 29, 2016
Nice one. Do MC  stutter always or is there something elsw I am missing? Well, this goes well paced. Keep writing :) *
lalalalalataz lalalalalataz Sep 09, 2016
I go to a school like this I have a friend who's family has a reality tv show and a friend who's parents are literally billionaires
slaya2775 slaya2775 Jan 25, 2016
Awwww. A very sad story. Very relatable for me, at least the struggle of highschool and not being one of the most popular kids. However, being at a rich or preppy school was less relatable to me, though i am so far enjoying the different perspective!
writer_alex writer_alex Jan 21, 2016
First of all, I absolutely love the name Blaze. I think it is so unique & it fits the character well. Also, I can already tell I'm going to fall in love with Adam. He sounds wicked & amazing. can't wait to read the rest of this story ;)
caramelstars caramelstars Jan 07, 2016
the idea is interesting but the beginning was a bit slow. however, the ending was great. i think the main character is nice. i am going to read more now.