Caribbean Werewolf (on hold)

Caribbean Werewolf (on hold)

3.2K Reads 66 Votes 6 Part Story
Ana Cristina By Moonlitflame Updated Aug 07, 2011

This story follows Mariana (Mary Ann) Vasquez and Jack Anglero. A boy and girl meet in a country far away from their home in the Caribbean, having met only once before in their childhood. This isn't a typical boy meets girl though... both of them have deep dark secrets that they are unwilling to share. As Mary Ann digs herself in deeper, the veil between what's real and what's not begins to crumble, along with her I"m-just-an-ordinary-teenage-girl facade, and it's up to Jack to help her figure out the truth about the supernatural, without getting them both in trouble.

lilly-rain lilly-rain Jul 13, 2012
Easy to read, you seem to understand your characters well and the plot is interesting. I was a bit worried with your A/N at the start, thinking I wasn't going to understand the dialogue....but clearly I did, lol
alfiyya_musa alfiyya_musa Sep 28, 2011
@Moonlitflame.i love ur writing its very . . . .precise.keep it up.
Demz5luv Demz5luv Sep 11, 2011
It sucks when best friends part...
                              worse than hear-breaks!
                              good job :)
vengefulkarma vengefulkarma Aug 16, 2011
A really interesting story so far. I like how it's in third point of view. o u o
                              Voted :)
LovelyLivvi LovelyLivvi Aug 05, 2011
I love the idea of the photos! It makes it all the more interesting. I saw the werewolf and me was like... drool, he's hawt! lawl! Anywho, I love your use of correct punctuation and the story seems great so far! I'm continue to read, as long as you continue the amazing writing (:
kay_milly kay_milly Aug 05, 2011
Your cover makes the stpry look interesting! i added ur story in my library and finish reading it