Bully Me (Completed)

Bully Me (Completed)

17.8K Reads 335 Votes 13 Part Story
Emma By guitarfreak8810 Completed

Rayne is a high school just trying to make it through - but it makes it difficult when she's picked on daily. She's always caught in the wrong place at the wrong time. The bullies: her own sister Topaz, her sister's boyfriend Will, and her sister's best friend Andrew. It seems like a never ending cycle to her and that's just the way it is- she will always be the victim. But some bullies are also victims...

AmyGarcia6 AmyGarcia6 Feb 12, 2012
Its so perfect u should keep going. . I love the askibg alexandria shirt but it very good
WinterChill WinterChill Jul 06, 2011
Oh, and I like the chapter names....at least this one makes since if you think of about it figuratively :D Like how her life is fog, or even when Drew and Steven show up and how she knew it was them even if it were foggy outside :D I really like your writing style!
WinterChill WinterChill Jul 06, 2011
This didn't seem unrealistic at all to me. I'm sure there are plenty of people out there that have been bullied this severely and you do a very good job at getting across the different emotions that are running throughout this story. Good Job!
guitarfreak8810 guitarfreak8810 Jun 13, 2011
@Lol5679 thank you so much! :) I'm glad you could relate to it, even though if it was in a kind of depressing way. Again, thank you :)
Lol5679 Lol5679 Jun 13, 2011
I've been bullied quite a bit in my life so the bullying aspect really spoke to me. Good start! Voted :D
guitarfreak8810 guitarfreak8810 Jun 13, 2011
@VanessaMarie aw <3 thank you! I'm so sorry you had to endure that :(!