Pokemon X and Y Ash's beginning

Pokemon X and Y Ash's beginning

147K Reads 3.1K Votes 77 Part Story
LucarioMaster41 By LucarioMaster41 Completed

What if Ash started his journey in Kalos instead of Kanto, and what if he traveled with another trainer who pursued gym battles. Watch as Ash starts his journey in Kalos and has different experiences then he would have. Contains amourshipping! Story belongs to STORYmaker2 on Fanfiction.net!

This was a great story please make more chapters and I will read them
TenaraTheCatDemon TenaraTheCatDemon Aug 27, 2016
Is that a reference to the manga? Wow, don't see those quite often
TheElectricGamer TheElectricGamer Oct 12, 2016
(Not criticizing; just suggestions) 
                              
                              1) Ash should at least have his Pikachu before they left for Kalos
                              2) Maybe put whoever said what at the end of what they said (like if Ash says something put "Ash said" at the end). I got a little confused with who was saying what
dukeelei dukeelei Aug 30, 2016
4 a second I thought this would be a different story arc by storymaker2 NOPE but the aura gardians in this story r op I hope u keep making more of autum and what his face (ash/Serena) oldest son FYI I read all of this book and its 3 sequels
dukeelei dukeelei Aug 30, 2016
Oh I didn't notice u guys just started reading this 😰 Lol I read this on fan fiction.net
LukasM10 LukasM10 5 days ago
Hmm..............Maybe he probably gets a shinx instead or Ralts or electric types.Finally he might catch a Slyveon.😄