Pokemon X and Y Ash's beginning

Pokemon X and Y Ash's beginning

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LucarioMaster41 By LucarioMaster41 Completed

What if Ash started his journey in Kalos instead of Kanto, and what if he traveled with another trainer who pursued gym battles. Watch as Ash starts his journey in Kalos and has different experiences then he would have. Contains amourshipping! Story belongs to STORYmaker2 on Fanfiction.net!

Is that a reference to the manga? Wow, don't see those quite often
(Not criticizing; just suggestions) 
                              
                              1) Ash should at least have his Pikachu before they left for Kalos
                              2) Maybe put whoever said what at the end of what they said (like if Ash says something put "Ash said" at the end). I got a little confused with who was saying what
dukeelei dukeelei Aug 30
4 a second I thought this would be a different story arc by storymaker2 NOPE but the aura gardians in this story r op I hope u keep making more of autum and what his face (ash/Serena) oldest son FYI I read all of this book and its 3 sequels
dukeelei dukeelei Aug 30
Oh I didn't notice u guys just started reading this 😰 Lol I read this on fan fiction.net
But you did catch something...or someone's heart (how to be cliche 101)
horrocks horrocks Dec 20, 2015
omg story maker 2 I LOVE YOUR FANFICTION ON FANFICTION.NET THEY ARE AWSOME !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11