What happens when 17 year old Rosie Winters witnesses her parents die? She goes mute. Although, after meeting a new friend Harry Hunter, will she finally speak up, or let her life fall apart...again?
Constructive criticism: I think you should go back and do some spelling revising, it's not a big deal but there are spelling mistakes ^.^ as a writer to I so get that they just slip past us lol
It's really good. PLEASE UPDATE SOON IT'S WONDERFUL . PENGUINS SALUTE TO YOU.
I would've slapped the crap out of her and then if she had friends with her I would've done that and if they would try to hit me. I'd drop kick all of them
Really short chapters so far but definitely great writing. Very interested in what u have in store
@kimbasue79 thanks I'm glad you like it so far! And don't worry you'll be reading how her parents died on chapter 5. Also, she tries to avoid the girls as much as she can, but it's still hard because they go to the same school so she can't really hide :)