Change of Heart

Change of Heart

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BethanyRKCD By BethanyRKCD Updated Dec 29, 2012

Nora Masey HATES her sister's boyfriend Rian. He used to be nice to her but then he turned out to be a jerk. He was always teasing her and pulling pranks on her. What she doesn't know though, is that he has serious feelings for her.When she finally starts to like him he goes away to college and Nora begins to develop feelings for Rians brother, Chad. Can Rian prove that he's better for her? Or will it be too late?
Rian Hardy can't help but love his girlfriend's little sister. She was everything he looked for in a girl and more. Picking on her was not as fun as he made it seem, but he'd do anything just to get to be around her. He just wished he would have thought of some other way to talk to her because now she hates him. Can he show her that he could be a great guy even with all his faults? Especially when she meets and starts liking his little brother, Chad,  who seems like a better match for her... or is he? Maybe Chad isn't all he's cracked up to be.

SheenaCadoo SheenaCadoo Sep 13, 2012
R u gonna update anytime soon!!!! Been waiting a min now.....
kaykillerby kaykillerby Jan 21, 2011
Wow the writing and vocabulary is so good, usually people don’t bother. Your such a good writer and the story seems like its going to be a good read.
BethanyRKCD BethanyRKCD Aug 27, 2010
@DemiTahchawwickah geeeeeeee thanks. i think we r like two peas in a pod. :D lol. 
                              
                              
DemiTahchawwickah DemiTahchawwickah Aug 27, 2010
Wow..Your a really good writer! i understood it well...it didnt start off to early...maybe because we have the same minds...hmm? what do you think scriptoe
smileforme101 smileforme101 Aug 22, 2010
It did start really fast but other than that i really liked it. Deffinately different. i'll be a  major fan though(:
BethanyRKCD BethanyRKCD Aug 05, 2010
@ToyBoat   Sorry, Rian is her sister's boyfriend who picks on her and pulls pranks on her. In this chapter he just got done putting silly putty in her hair :D 
                              
                              Thanks for the compliment though!! Sorry for the confusion.