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Taken

Taken

51.5K Reads 902 Votes 27 Part Story
Megan By Rebelidiot Completed

Jenna, the typical small-town rich girl, is kidnaped by some not-so-bad guys and is forced to spend a entire trip with them traveling to their ''boss's'' house, but while one of the kidnappers has been keeping a close eye on her. Will these two star-crossed lovers be able to fall in love under their unfortunate circumstances?

AGOODWRITER_5566 AGOODWRITER_5566 Dec 14, 2016
Why did e even say his name??!! Idiot! Make up a gosh dang name, for him and yourself. That happen to me before and I made up a name for me and my dad!
sabinewrenrebels sabinewrenrebels Dec 13, 2016
I would've been running to the car and he might've been punched by now..
AGOODWRITER_5566 AGOODWRITER_5566 Dec 14, 2016
I guess everyone would do something different in that situation.
The first chapter is good but some of the words are spelled wrong and it's a little choppy other than that great story :)
AGOODWRITER_5566 AGOODWRITER_5566 Dec 14, 2016
If that was me, as soon as I see a built guy I would know something's up. So I would take a pic of him and his car and put it in my car, just incase police need info on to help find me, just incase something happens
I enjoy the story but your sentences are choppy and come off as robotic