Taken

Taken

59.3K Reads 1K Votes 27 Part Story
Megan By Rebelidiot Completed

Jenna, the typical small-town rich girl, is kidnaped by some not-so-bad guys and is forced to spend a entire trip with them traveling to their ''boss's'' house, but while one of the kidnappers has been keeping a close eye on her. Will these two star-crossed lovers be able to fall in love under their unfortunate circumstances?

http_liaaa http_liaaa Jul 28
I'd rather that than a guy be scared to hold my hand ... cough cough ex
AGOODWRITER_5566 AGOODWRITER_5566 Dec 14, 2016
Why did e even say his name??!! Idiot! Make up a gosh dang name, for him and yourself. That happen to me before and I made up a name for me and my dad!
AGOODWRITER_5566 AGOODWRITER_5566 Dec 14, 2016
I guess everyone would do something different in that situation.
The first chapter is good but some of the words are spelled wrong and it's a little choppy other than that great story :)
I enjoy the story but your sentences are choppy and come off as robotic
faitham137 faitham137 Jun 29, 2013
An interesting chapter!! I think you have me hooked with the story line! :D